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leave my heart broken,
let me be fall my own self,
let it shatter, tremble and wither.
as someone mirror that’s gotten too tired
of giving its reflector her reflection
and decides to churn on its own self.
it’s the only way to awaken the fragments
to crystallize the dust, into life.
the only way to catch the treads of light
that reflect and collect on my broken heart
and sew them it into my skin.
let me be fall my own self,
let it shatter, tremble and wither.
as someone mirror that’s gotten too tired
of giving its reflector her reflection
and decides to churn on its own self.
it’s the only way to awaken the fragments
to crystallize the dust, into life.
the only way to catch the treads of light
that reflect and collect on my broken heart
and sew them it into my skin.
it happens every now and than...
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This work has quite the amazing imagery. I like how you have posed it as a reflection tired of providing a reflection. Just a typo perhaps:
"as someones mirror that’s gotten too tired"
Other than that the ending is quite well handled - the emotions express really well in this work!
"as someones mirror that’s gotten too tired"
Other than that the ending is quite well handled - the emotions express really well in this work!