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There are reasons to shy away from the wind
To not let it penetrate your skin
Or flutter your rich creamy hazel hair.
To not let it acknowledge your presence,
or make you smile or shiver

Because it will remember
your warmth
your wishes as you sang of your loved ones
it will remember your fragileness
as it brought you a storm,
it will remember your whisper,
the one you thought was your secret.

And It will bring it all to me
who is waiting for you to give your self away.
I am getting worse and worse with titles...GRRRRR!

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Kay-March Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
Seems consistent with the rest of the poem (the title I mean). They go well together.
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Sparia Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student General Artist
finally :D
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
Sometimes they go crazy on us... for me is the roses. Hehehe!!!
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Sparia Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student General Artist
tell me about it! its insane..
been working on a poem for month...and its this no where near as good as it can me..:frustrated:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Yeah... exactly! Sometimes Grrr!!
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Sparia Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student General Artist
dam..i over did it...
drew for 4 hours..than molded clay for another 3 and half...
my shoulders are in alot of pain... :(
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
I know the feeling!! Quite painful, take it more easy next time.
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Sparia Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
well..i am busy being creative..so i guess..relaxing or taking my time is out of question.
I have long list of things i need to finish before my actually full time college starts again..
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nahnia Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student General Artist
very nice
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Sparia Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student General Artist
thank you! :)
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silhara Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student Photographer
flows nicely..makes u want to flow with the wind and see where it takes u
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Sparia Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student General Artist
yep!
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
The wind will remember
or just it will remeber, since it's a phrase from the poem
It's so full of deep feelings. Beautiful.
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Sparia Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Student General Artist
:thanks:

i think "wind will remember" should do? yes?
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
Yes, it suites like a glove...
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Sparia Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Student General Artist
glad to hear that :)
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
Hehe... go for it.
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Sparia Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Student General Artist
well...for some reason i type a different title than the one i was thinking of..humm
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
Heheh!! Now... I'm sorry that's too funny.
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Sparia Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Student General Artist
:D
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